Tuesday, 4 March 2014

Photoshoot 2.

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Draft Feedback.


From this feedback, it is clear what I need to make amendments on. This will make it easier for me to make my improvements to the Magazine.  After receiving this feedback verbally, I have come to the conclusion that I need to change the appearance of my Magazine in order to gain the higher marks. Certain aspects of the Magazine, didn't make it look like a professional Cover, Contents or Double Page Spread; so that is what I will be improving and evidently changing so it looks like a Magazine.